Four Feverish Haikus

[damigella]

Written for feverish nekkid Wilson Camp Sick!Wilson Challenge. Shameless PWP. 

Rating R, no warnings or spoilers.
Summary: what would you do first if you saw Wilson naked and feverish? House too.

 

 

Naked feverish
(his hands, his tongue exploring)
Wilson is so hot

House opens his fly
(sweaty palms on his shoulders) 
plunges in the heat

Heat along his shaft
Hot hardness held in his hand
Simultaneous screams

Shining dark brown eyes
their nakedness exposing

the fever of love

 

Comments

[menolly-au.livejournal.com]

Cold dark winter night
reading words from far away
brings warmth into life

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

Hot summer morning
sipping my first espresso
smiling at kind words

[yarroway.livejournal.com]

I can't write haiku, but that just means I admire those who can even more. Very creative use of the prompt.

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

Haikus are the only poems I can write in English: I can't hear your vowels, so I can't rhyme, but I can count syllables (more or less).

I'm glad you appreciated!

[cellista-in-c.livejournal.com]

Phew. Wilson's not the only one feeling a bit feverish, all of a sudden...

Brilliant idea! I'm now tempted to try writing one of the next challenges in a sonnet form or something (I'm kidding. I can't write poetry for anything.)

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

Why wouldn't you write a sonnet? You at least know how English vowels sound like. Although if no sonnet=more awesome fics, I may be inclined to agree with your choice.

Thank you for the comment!

[chocolate-frapp.livejournal.com]

fantastic!

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[jezziejay.livejournal.com]

lovely lovely love
ly lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely love

See what I did there :)

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

See what I did there :)
You taught me that lovely has two syllables, despite the fact that it looks like it has three :-)
Thanks (also for the 8&1/2 lovely's).

[selkie3.livejournal.com]

Okay, how on earth did I miss this?!

My dear, you have reduced me to simply saying guh and unf! :D

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

"you have reduced me to simply saying guh and unf!"

I don't think House is saying so much more [blushes]. Thanks you!

[brindlewolf.livejournal.com]

Pant, pant ... how did I miss these ??? So hot, these are wonderful! <3

[damigella-314.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!