http://cellista-in-c.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cellista-in-c.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] damigella 2011-07-02 12:14 am (UTC)

Just to focus on one detail, I really liked the bit about heartburn from spicy food being part of why Wilson's sucks - with the way that cooking/food is such a stress reliever for him, I can totally see how that ailment is making everything just that much worse.

And liked the note of bitterness when he contemplates that there's no reason why he shouldn't take up squash again.

Nice little piece!

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