Not all brain cancers are deadly. Or at least so I hope.
Definitely true. I know a child who survived it and is doing very well. But as you said, it could be tumor without being cancerous, right (though to grow that fast I think it might have to be)?
I liked your piece. Especially the beginning with the itch. I don't know if you meant it or not, but because of the episode "The Itch" i always think of an itch as a metaphor for emotional distress with this show.
You always ask for English critiques, so I will offer here that this line doesn't sound right to my American English ear:
His sweated body when running together before the infarction
"sweated" is a verb in the past tense, not an adjective as you want here. You could simply replace it with "sweaty" and it would fit perfectly, or for more power go with something like "sweat soaked" to put it firmly in the past tense.
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Date: 2011-05-31 04:43 pm (UTC)Definitely true. I know a child who survived it and is doing very well. But as you said, it could be tumor without being cancerous, right (though to grow that fast I think it might have to be)?
I liked your piece. Especially the beginning with the itch. I don't know if you meant it or not, but because of the episode "The Itch" i always think of an itch as a metaphor for emotional distress with this show.
You always ask for English critiques, so I will offer here that this line doesn't sound right to my American English ear:
His sweated body when running together before the infarction
"sweated" is a verb in the past tense, not an adjective as you want here. You could simply replace it with "sweaty" and it would fit perfectly, or for more power go with something like "sweat soaked" to put it firmly in the past tense.